Sunday, January 11, 2009

New Song I Wrote

This is a new song I wrote called "Shadow Of What I Once Was"
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Just one last chance
I know I can make it up
Just give me that last breath
I'll know you'll live it up

But I'm dying,
slowly without you here
and I'm crying, just one last breath
to know your near

I'm a shadow of what I once was
Everything brings back the memories
That I loved
Could you give me, one last chance to make it up
Cause I don't wanna be a shadow of what I was

Looking out in silence, the empty seat right next to me
Everything reminds me, of what i wanted it to be
But i can't see, if you feel the same about me
but just come back, i promise to make you feel differently

But I'm dying,
slowly without you here
and I'm crying, just one last breath
to know your near

I'm a shadow of what I once was
Everything brings back the memories
That I loved
Could you give me, one last chance to make it up
Cause I don't wanna be a shadow of what I was

Could you give me, one last chance
to hear your breathing, i want to know
that your near. Please forgive me, i never
meant to hurt you, but don't leave me.
your tearing my heart in two

I'm a shadow of what I once was
Everything brings back the memories
That I loved
Could you give me, one last chance to make it up
Cause I don't wanna be a shadow of what I was

A shadow of what i once was...................

4 comments:

Karly said...

OMG!!! that's friggin awesome!!!!!!!!! wow! (speachless)

katie said...

DAMN!!!!! that is soooooooooo friggin awesome. that is way better than ur others by a lot!!!................ummmmmmmmmmmm yea im like in shock right now. THAT IS FRICKEN SWEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!

Skye said...

WOW!!!!!!

That's brilliant!!! Love it!
I can't believe you came up with that! Wow! Well I do believe it 'cause you usually come up with good things like that. LOL! But I'm in shock - that is so good!

Fly on forever!

The Girl Who Could Fly

Dark wolf said...

omg!!! u need to record it and put it up here!!! i wanna listen to it soooooo badly!!!!!!

Lief