Songs I've Written, they are not great, but i want criticism.

Wrote this tonight, its called the "Last Goodbye"

If I died tonight
Would you care if I leave you?
With this one last goodbye

And If I vanish forever
Will you be there to say?
To say that I love you tonight

Now this is my final chance
To make you mines
And this is my life
Ill spend it all for you
But if I’m gone tonight
Then this is my last goodbye.

One more night I’ll be here
To stay, but one more night is
All I have to give you.

So I’ll be yours for my final night
And ill be yours for this last time
But I I’ll be yours for my final day
And tonight, I will say I will say
That I love you

Now this is my final chance
To make you mines
And this is my life
Ill spend it all for you
But if I’m gone tonight
Then this is my last goodbye.

And this is my last night with you
My last night with you
But I won’t be gone
I’ll be yours forever

This is one when i first tried to write a song, its called "The Puppet And The Man"

I’m just a puppet
A lonely puppet on your devilish stage
I whisper to the audience to help me make you happy
Cause I’m loving every moment that you smile and play with me

Just slow down
This is my final act
My final act to prove to you that I truly do care
And if you don't watch me tonight
Then I won't stop because this is the time and I’m playing the puppet
The puppet in your heart

Your lonely stare makes my strings burn away
I want to see your smile again
I wave around letting your grin explode into laughter
And I dance to make you love me

Just slow down
This is my final act
My final act to prove to you that I truly do care
And if you don't watch me tonight
Then I won't stop because this is the time and I’m playing the puppet
The puppet in your heart

This is my, this is my
This is my final act for you
I sit at the stage crying for you
I grow into the man you want me to be
Your eyes shine right through me
And my tears turn into an angel’s crystal
As you turn to me and slowly whisper those three little words

Just slow down
This is my final act
My final act to prove to you that I truly do care
And as you finally watch me
I will play more than puppet
I will play the puppet and the man
The man you need me to be................................

Dark Gothvian

Well as you may have heard, the leader of Flamex, Dark Gothvian, is currently incapacitated in the Scarvian Belt. Where he was trapped by a demon named Rouka or as some of you may know Chiharu. First order of business is of course, the retrieval of Chiharu and stopping of her rampage. This is very important because we do not need any more death's on our hands. I propose we watch out for her as a precaution and do not trust anyone, you do not know, or who will not reveal their identity's to you because this is endangerment to you as well as the flock.Secondly is me and my friend havoc becoming leaders. I do not demand respect and i really don't mind if I receive or not, I am just here as a fill in for Dark. All I ask is this, respect everyone in the flock equally and Dark we will return as soon as we can possibly get him out of the Scarvian Belt, i am just asking that you hold on and we'll get through this as a team should get through this. Together we rise, but alone we die. This is what i hope you all listen to for now.

~Alter Cosmos and Abel Cosmos~

-Leaders But Not Yet Leaders-

My Sprite Movie Of The Flock

This will be my greatest sprite animation ever, or I'm planning for it to be. This is the first episode and will consist of the original members of Dark's Flock Flamex. This is the story of how the founding members came to be and how we ended up together. So this video will have in it - Me-Alter / Havoc / Dark / The Girl / Karly / X / Jax / Tyu / and several other people including Lachlann and maybe 1 or 2 more. Comment if I'm forgetting anyone who was in the original flock, before all the other people came aboard (namely the 40 members we have now). Here are a picture of the sprites I'm using for Havoc, Karly, and Myself. Send me a message if you have any questions, and i will require all the people in this movie besides Karly, and Havoc to give me a description of themselves with their powers so that i may depict you properly. Also if you've used sprites before and have a request as to what you want, please do tell and email me at Dycera_crew@yahoo.com.


This is Alter


This is Havoc


This is Karly

Alter Singing Horribly Please Listen HAHA

Me Singing "Headfirst Slide Into Cooperstown On A Bad Bet" by Fall Out Boy, off their newest album Folie A Deux'. Great Song if you ever ger the chance to listen to the actual version. And BTW i am giving permission to laugh at my inability to sing etc., so please comment truthfully. I'd rather have a truthful person, than a liar. TTYL FEAR MY EVIL LAUGH MWHAHAHAHAHA