Ok this is the second level of competition that me and Katie are going towards since the previous level ended in a 1:1 ratio of liking. This competition level is consistant of Song Writing capabilities. Please comment on both blogs and give feedback as to who is better.
Song - "Listen To Me"
Look towards me and what do you see
A boy or the man that I'm trying to be
Your lost in your thoughts so you can't see
Or hear what I'm trying to say
I'm waiting for you to hear
"Listen to Me that's all I'm asking"
"Listen to Me before I let go....."
Your leaving me helpless
Caught without a voice
But listen to me, that's all I'm asking
You listen to her, and you'll listen to him
I'm telling you things, but your not ever listening
Your walking blindly off of a plank
Cause you won't ever hear what I'm trying to say
And I'm waiting for you to hear
"Listen to Me that's all I'm asking"
"Listen to Me before I let go....."
Your leaving me helpless
Caught without a voice
But listen to me, that's all I'm asking
This one last time
I'm trying to believe
That you really do care
But it feels like you leaving me
I'm waiting for you to hear
"Listen to Me that's all I'm asking"
"Listen to Me before I let go....."
Your leaving me helpless
Caught without a voice
But listen to me, that's all I'm asking
I'm making you see what you can't see
But listen to me, that's all I'm asking.
4 comments:
Cool song. I'll check out katie's now and tell you which i think is better.
Fly on forever!
The Girl Who Could Fly
Listening...
i think it was used one to many times,
but good song ^.^
Listen is part of the chorus lol
~Alter Cosmos~
-Laughing a little-
Uhms... Hi's there. I am Nitru, I see that you are in a little club type thingy that has a lot of hybrids in it. I am wondering if you could look at my blog--
Nitru-nixxion.blogspot.com-- and accept me into your little group, I will go look at other people's blogs that comment on yours.
Nitru
PS, I'm seven, look at my blog and it'll explaiinnn EVERYTHANG
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